Marcus Setzer
Sight Sound Motion
Dr. Mirrer
April 2, 2012
Exercise
3 Part 3
In my group we basically discuss that some of our
stories had some bad grammar and that we needed to impose more expression,
action, and rumor. Not too much of our stories can be dry, boring, but more excitement
it so when I our lovely professor reads them she will enjoy them, and also have
an imagination that she is actually there when the story is taking place. We
want her to be able to enjoy the stories when she reads them so they will not
be boring. Speaking to my group I told them that no one likes reading boring
stories when they are reading they like to think that they are actually in the
story when they are reading. I know I do because when I'm reading books and
people stories I like excitement. That’s what I express to my group that put
some flavor and sugar into your stories when you’re writing them.
Trey and
Derek had some ideas also when we were discussing the stories and they agreed
with me. Everyone likes excitement when reading someone stories and more descriptive
too when you are reading. So we made some changes while we were reading each
other stories toward each others.
